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Jason Reid's avatar

Solid (and subtle) alliteration throughout, but particularly toward the end. It drives the poem (perhaps) in a way not unlike that of the sea

PS Conway's avatar

Heartbreakingly real. The sea’s refusal feels more structural, less symbolic, a quiet force that sets the poem’s moral temperature... Great writing.

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